New Beginnings- a Shadorma

In the dark 
Finally escaped 
I can see
A new hope
A light leads me where I'm free
The true me at last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 16, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Candice, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-)
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January 13, 2016 at 7:58 PM
I like how you did yours!! congrats for the win
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January 12, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Candice, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT
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January 11, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Glad that you found the way to the new you, Candice! ~ Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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January 11, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Candice, I love the wisdom! Congrats on your win! Love, Eve
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January 11, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Candice, I like this creative take on new beginnings! Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
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January 5, 2016 at 11:33 AM
nicely said, I like it
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