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New Beginning

One room apartment
and days alone to ponder
just what apart meant

lost lovehaiku

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Joesephine Remarnier

September 10, 2010 at 5:24 AM

Brilliant, just love the way you play with language. Also, I'm thinking because of a Haikus' length limitations the feeling of sadness is elevated. I normally don't care for Haikus but this may be one of the best I've read.

Andrea Dietrich

September 9, 2010 at 5:41 PM

I really enjoyed this one. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

September 7, 2010 at 1:59 PM

That sounds like being trapped and lonely or free as a bird to do what one wants to do when they want to do it....I like the last half of that previous line to do what one wants to do..Sara

David Smalling

September 6, 2010 at 11:06 AM

Something to tear the heart and rent the emotions ... a poem from a wonderful mind

Constance La France

September 5, 2010 at 6:35 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry. I can sure relate to your words in this poem, I spend hours in comptemplation, and then I write of it in poetry.. love Constance

Ravindra K Kapoor

September 4, 2010 at 9:27 PM

Beautiful words telling the gravity of loneliness but for a poet, loneliness can also be a boon, if you can make it. Try. Many thanks for your sweet comments on my Poem Patradoot35. Love and best wishes....Ravindra........Wayne Sapp.