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New Baby Footles

I peep …
Asleep

He cries
Mum sighs

He’s wet
Get set

Feed time
Sublime 

At breast -
it's best!

Crappy
Nappy

Big poops
Mum scoops

He’s mine
Divine


19th August 2014

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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July 5, 2021 at 9:57 AM

These are great. Brings back memories. Congratulations!

July 4, 2021 at 12:38 PM

It is a fantastic set of tunes, and much like the routine of caring for a baby, keep doing it. Congratulations on your top win, and my very best wishes. Thanks for your generous visit to my page.

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2021 at 8:01 AM

so cute, Jan. Congrats

July 4, 2021 at 12:06 PM

Thanks Andrea Happy 4th July xx

August 19, 2014 at 7:31 PM

i love all of these, jan! adorable!

August 19, 2014 at 7:34 PM

Thank you so much Ilene i have had a lot of fun writing footles over the past couple of days:-) Hugs jan xxx

August 19, 2014 at 5:45 PM

Perfect! Love it Jan :) :)

August 19, 2014 at 5:50 PM

I was just having fun after a stressful day with parents - been out to listen to some swing music tonight was good:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 19, 2014 at 3:38 PM

Wonderful string of tootles and like life with a baby.....just keep repeating them.

August 19, 2014 at 3:51 PM

Thanks John:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 19, 2014 at 3:16 PM

- Lovely and sweet footle, Jan !!! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

August 19, 2014 at 3:50 PM

its just for fun - have submitted the fornication footles Lol Hugs Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

August 19, 2014 at 12:06 PM

Lol, love this!

August 19, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Thanks for commenting Toquyen:-) Hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

August 19, 2014 at 10:28 AM

YOU have mastered this form, my dear. LOVE THESE! :) Hugs

August 19, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Thanks Eileen I am having fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 19, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Absolutely stunning write, Jan

August 19, 2014 at 3:48 PM

Thank you so much Dr Metha:-) I do appreciate your feedback:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 19, 2014 at 9:43 AM

YOU GO GIRL!

August 19, 2014 at 3:48 PM

I am indebted to YOU Judy for bringing this form to my attention - am having so much fun thank you thank you thank you:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 19, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Wow Jan another marvellous series ! Loved much!

August 19, 2014 at 3:47 PM

Thanks Dr Sharma I am having fun with these:-) Hugs Jan xx

August 19, 2014 at 9:00 AM

Big eyes.....no lies......hugs Jan....I love these....:)

August 19, 2014 at 9:08 AM

I may not be back on today so sweet dreams xx

August 19, 2014 at 9:04 AM

Yes...I will be on later...need some sleep :)

August 19, 2014 at 9:03 AM

Oh yes Tim I love that - shame we have to grow up isn't it:-( Hugs jan xx

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