New Amour

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                                              In love was I
                                         Sparkling spry float
                                                Iridescent

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/28/2011 6:20:00 PM

* “Sounds Sooo Very Beautiful * Reminds Myself of A Verse I Posted A Few Months Past * About A Sorority's Moment * My Dear Beautiful Sara * Thank You for Your Kind Visit * Luv * Sarah.” *

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/23/2011 1:48:00 PM

What a lovely description of new love, Sara. Really like the way you describe the "sparkling spry float." I may go to Callaway again to see the Festival in Lights. Would you and Doris care to join me in the holiday light tour? My treat. Love, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/23/2011 10:58:00 AM

Poetic and to the point. Nicely done. xoxo Robert.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/23/2011 5:48:00 AM

Sweet romantic piece, my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 7:00:00 PM

You know it is an awesome poem Sara... I love it.. I like MI' New AMOUR.... God bless,..p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/21/2011 5:24:00 PM

Impressive sparkle within this write! This is what love is made of...Iridescence! I love this poem!!

Jl Sadberry

Date: 10/21/2011 1:13:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Sounds As Though The Many Encompassing Emotions Which Fill Ones Heart Amid The Colourful Moments In Love My Dear Precious & Lovely Sara! *^_^* The Opening Line Is As Though A Stroll Upon Memories Trail Perhaps? *^_^* And Yesss, Love Is Lively & Surely, A Gift From Above *^_^* Very Lovely Verse My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *