Nevermore

NEVERMORE

What hell!  Of pale-green fever
that slithers and shakes no longer,
clammy under a cold clean sheet.

Feel the weight of gold roses placed
over the splintered sphinx,
luck of flotsam wood escape —
of twisted fate, no wand will save.

Coins placed where pupils stare,
a swamp of hair on feather pillow, heavy.
How oft her lair, I’d treat myself
to penny candy - sweetness sours.

The howl like a wolf tears,
through my gaping hole.
The dam suddenly severed
divides me from her.

Woe! Woe! Hear the church bells!
Take a stake to my undead heart.
Gargoyles lurch off the steepled seas.
Oh please! I repent — and rend

my reptile skin, stick acupuncture swords
in my pinpoint eyes,
but the blurred black din continues
to squawk, “nevermore...nevermore”

1/7/2018
Poe in Plath Style
Inspired by Poe’s poem For Annie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/9/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win! Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/9/2018 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim, an excellent entry xxoo
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Date: 3/9/2018 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your swell deserved win, Kim.
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Date: 3/9/2018 11:15:00 AM
I'm so glad I had the chance to see your Poe-Plath imagination at work, Kim! This is terrific! Congrats to you !!
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Date: 3/9/2018 10:50:00 AM
wow Kim! outstanding, great poem..congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/8/2018 12:30:00 PM
I see the Poe in there for sure, Kim, Great entry, GL in the contest xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! This was a tough assignment!
Date: 2/8/2018 5:35:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/7/2018 9:56:00 PM
You are amazing, that was fantastic Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
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