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Neverlasting Life

So wonderful the taste Unimaginable texture it leaves behind I do so love the metallic aftertaste Can not wait for the mints to take away my breath I can almost feel the taste tearing my throat. Does feel good to be able to breath Always wanted something worth succeeding Life can be sweet depending of course how we choose to chew Living bitter is jot always a choice nor always optional I can agree with this as the tablet takes my breath For too long I held it back but not for long Enjoying the sweet taste of my final breath So exhilarating the aftershock Alone in the room as the face goes blue Very happy to know the pain will soon deplete Embracing the metallic taste and the texture of my tastebuds boiling Releasing every life memory in just a few seconds watching it flash a million miles So sweet the afterlife mint which I had chosen feels so wrong yet so did the pain

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Date: 12/19/2017 10:52:00 PM
Oh my , Raven, I hope this isn't truth , but just a write.. life is precious no matter what... Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/26/2017 2:40:00 PM
:) I understand :)

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