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Never-Ending Flames

Oh, he that kisses my pale cheek, And my scarlet lips; And my raven hair he does caress, Our love is fierce and strong; Oh, come to me in dreams, in dreams. Hearts and souls, mirror images of desire, Entwined in never-ending flames; A forever blazing inferno of love, No two more linked, connected, alike; Such great passion and sweetness. And although he has long gone above, A name engraved in cold stone; Beneath the earth bones decayed, We remain twin flames, burning; For the soul, the soul never ever dies. Oh, he that kisses my pale cheek, And my scarlet lips; And my raven hair he does caress, Our love is fierce and strong; Oh, come to me in dreams, in dreams. And when my life is done, love, We shall be again a matching pair; And dwell as two flaming stars above. ___________________________ March 2, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Never-Ending Flames Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-537-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, Twin Flames sponsor, Nayda, Ivette Negron First Place
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Amezimi Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 5:15 AM
Congrats and keep writing beauties like this... thanks for sharing, Dominic.
A  Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 12:55 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:18 AM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations ~
Raven Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Desire, Passion, Romance, Love, all wrapped up and served with such gentle words. Your words can conjure up such wonderful visions in the mind of the reader and reach deep within the Soul, reaching deep into the heart of the reader with their gentleness. Once more you lay a dream of of peace before us. This dream has to be a seven and into my faves....MIKE.
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the lovely comment and the seven and fav, appreciate so much ~
Hicks Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Awesome poem, Broken Wings! I loved the turn around from two flames too twin flaming stars in the night sky .... sounds like a better deal to me. Congrats.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Tim, thanks for visiting with the great comment and the congrats !
Negron Flores Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Nayda, thanks for a great contest and for my awesome placement !
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 2:16 PM
Great passion and great win. Congratulations, Broken Wings
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Scars Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 12:32 PM
BW, wonderful poem! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful, and the wonderful !
Inman Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Emotionally and beautifully written, BW. You are such a romantic.
La France Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 9:36 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Beaufort Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 3:09 PM
May it be so. Absolutely.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Duke, thanks for visiting, appreciate !
Cheema Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 5:02 AM
Superb Constance!
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Balveen, thanks for visiting with the superb !
Mcconnell Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Real great write Constance, so romantic and emotional, really catches one's breath!
La France Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Gordon, thanks for visiting with the nice comment, so appreciated !!
Ashe Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Broken Wings...your "flame" will never be extinguished!...it will always "flame" brighter! May you always "Write on!"
La France Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Walter, thank you so much for that lovely comment ~
Bordner Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Your pale cheek a frost of ivory silk, those scarlet lips the heat of my interests, your raven hair feathered so fair, beneath and above the stars our love does glare, forever and ever is the ink in our book..."Hearts and souls, mirror images of desire..." your beauty is elegant and wise Wings of Fire...J.A.B.
La France Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Justin, oh thank you for that beautiful poetic comment and for the compliments !!
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:29 PM
romantic :) good luck in Nayda's contest.
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 12:51 AM
Eve, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
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