Never To Be - Love

you belong to him
wanting what I cannot have
brings beautiful hurt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 9:57 AM
This one brings an ouchie to my heart!! Oh dear.....beautiful hurt is the worst kind!! Well done, my friend!
Gorelick Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 8:27 AM
OH no, your are writing about me! lol. Good one and congrats. BG
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 7:59 AM
- Tim - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 8:20 PM
This one reminded me of that old rock song. Hurts so good!!! Nice one, Tim. Congrats on the win.
Mehta Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Nothing But Love, Tim
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April 25, 2010 at 7:56 PM
The emotion comes through your words on this one. Lost love does bring pain. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week. Karen
Brown Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Friends with benefits always hurt you the most , so much truth in so few words, wonderful write!
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 2:06 PM
ahhh the pain....why are joy and pain so connected? Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 5:24 PM
awwwww it seems it's "easier?" to want something we can't have? I'm sure if you wish to you will find a dear one soon! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 9:55 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Tim. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 10:57 PM
Bravo Tim, Great Senryu. "HAPPY NEW YEAR. Sincerely, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 10:30 PM
I enjoyed this senryu from you! andrea
Harman Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 7:29 PM
Hmm i would normally complain that it is so short, But i felt it, yay, nice,,,
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