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Never To Be Forgotten

For you, the first to teach me poetry, I wrote a little poem at age nine. I don't remember writing any more till I had you for English in ninth grade. One day when we were talking at your desk, I saw a single laminated sheet. I took a closer look and realized the childish cursive on the page was mine. You'd saved "My Winter Poem" all those years and brought it as my gift. I almost cried. I smile now as I vividly recall this scene from over fifty years ago. As teacher and librarian, you earned the praise of all. We recognized your love of students, language, books, and our small school. We knew how much you wanted us to learn. If I had never told you how I felt, beyond that day when I was just a teen, I'd be without excuse, but I did claim the opportunities to give you praise. In our last conversation at a school reunion just a few short years ago, I told you how I often think of you when choosing just-right words for poetry. I recently shared memories of you with others who held you in high regard. We wiped our tears and said our last good-byes to one who taught much more than books and rules. I wrote this in honor and memory of Mrs. Vernis Collins, who recently died at age 97. She taught me in third grade and again in high-school freshman language arts. She taught so much more than English and poetry. Date: October 5, 2019 Contest Title: Your Favorite Teacher or Professor Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 11/1/2019 10:54:00 PM
A great tribute to your teacher she would have loved it, Janice , congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/2/2019 9:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 10/31/2019 2:21:00 PM
- The teacher you will never forget ... congratulations on your great winning poem, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/2/2019 9:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 10/12/2019 11:00:00 AM
What a beautiful piece. It is very touching. Might I suggest that you add your first poem as I am sure many would love to read the seeds of your artistry. I expect this one will be high on the winners list.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/12/2019 12:36:00 PM
I have lost that poem! Of all things to lose! I just remember lines about sitting near the fire eating a bowl of oatmeal. Richard, you are SO encouraging--building others up. And you are a great poet. Thank you. Janice
Date: 10/11/2019 12:16:00 AM
Janice, You have a real gift in this memory and verse. Your touching recount of what a wonderfully thoughtful teacher, Mrs. Collins was to you needed to be told. Thank you for sharing this. Would so love to read 'My Winter Poem'. For now, the treasures remain. -Richard
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/11/2019 9:29:00 AM
Richard, thanks so much for this great comment. Will read your poem now. :-) Janice
Date: 10/6/2019 8:19:00 PM
wow, she lived a long time. My favorite was also a writing teacher but from high school and now i Have to try to remember her name . I recently learned it and need to find it again! This was an outstanding tribute to her.
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Date: 10/6/2019 1:40:00 PM
You are an exceptional person for remembering and acknowledging! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 10/6/2019 7:50:00 AM
i think this is one of your best poems, what a lovely tribute and it was so heart felt.... brilliant..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2019 1:49:00 PM
S.O., your comment has made my day! Thank you so much. Janice
Date: 10/5/2019 9:55:00 PM
This is a wonderful dedication. She would love it. Bless you always, With love, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/5/2019 10:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
Date: 10/5/2019 2:45:00 PM
This is so heartfelt tribute and memorial to your teacher. Excellent write from start to finish..enjoyed the soft tone and gratitude of your words. All the best, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/5/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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