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Never Through

Just let me finish the song To say how i truly feel about you Its for you that I long Its for us the sky turned blue See what I see See the creature in me All we can do is be All we can be is free Freedom is the purpose of living Not to be consumed with things until we die The idea is to be giving And its only to you that i ever say hi So it has to be obvious then How much it truly is you The question is not when Its whether you feel it too All these words really mean Is that i have deep feelings for you Its on me that you can lean For we are never through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 10:32:00 PM
Hmm maybe I misread it, but from a woman's view, some of those impossible examples didn't fit ME. haha (I won't go into detail). Anyway, on to this one: I think it is a very sweet poem with a lot of truth. But why do you say "it's only to you I ever say hi?" You better say hi to me too. heehee luv, andrea
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