Casper Chubs Poet Quatrain

Never Through

Just let me finish the song
To say how i truly feel about you
Its for you that I long
Its for us the sky turned blue

See what I see
See the creature in me
All we can do is be
All we can be is free

Freedom is the purpose of living
Not to be consumed with things until we die
The idea is to be giving
And its only to you that i ever say hi

So it has to be obvious then
How much it truly is you
The question is not when
Its whether you feel it too

All these words really mean
Is that i have deep feelings for you
Its on me that you can lean
For we are never through

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Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2009 at 10:32 PM Hmm maybe I misread it, but from a woman's view, some of those impossible examples didn't fit ME. haha (I won't go into detail). Anyway, on to this one: I think it is a very sweet poem with a lot of truth. But why do you say "it's only to you I ever say hi?" You better say hi to me too. heehee luv, andrea