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She came into the church with her eyes hung low Not allowing any of us more than a glimpse of her well-built wall Sat in the pew in her white dress, moving rather slow I had an inkling of who she might be, but was not sure at all I knew she had been through a lot, a horrible ordeal they said. I said some prayers for her soul, but did not stop or stare Clandescently sequestered, she looked down at the hymnal red. I felt Jesus put a hand on my shoulder, and give me a dare. But I was too frightened of her emotions, I felt a kind of fear. I knew she was His child, and I wished I had been brave. But when I looked back, she was gone, this simple sweet dear. I shuddered as I thought of how close she had come to the grave. One thing for sure, this encounter changed me that day. I am much more apt to go answer Jesus’s call in the air. Because I have never stopped wishing I had found a way To ask her how she was doing, and let her know that I care. Written 12-18-2020 Contest: A rhyme story poem with eyes Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/26/2020 9:05:00 AM
Heya Caren, I too looked at this photo, but could not find any words to try explain what on earth was going on in her mind, now I realize after reading your absolute deserving winner, it was something unspeakable and terrible, yet was more about others reaction or inaction to offer help, congratulations cheers David
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2020 12:53:00 PM
Thank you David. I appreciate it.
Date: 12/25/2020 10:45:00 PM
Empathy and compassion oozing from each line! Beautiful! Congrats on your win!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/25/2020 2:49:00 PM
Caren, massive Congratulations. You are the peoples' writer. Giving an impression of ease in telling situation and reaction. Your poem is straightforward but haunting. A deserved top Win on exclusive list.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Sigrid. What a sweet thing to say!
Date: 12/25/2020 2:54:00 AM
Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/25/2020 11:40:00 AM
Merry Christmas Beata
Date: 12/23/2020 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Many times we wait when we should make a move. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula. I really enjoyed this contest because this photo looked EXACTLY like my oldest daughter, Angela.
Date: 12/23/2020 11:23:00 AM
So beautiful Caren and so touching. You have reached into the human experience of wishing we had done or said something different. This is so well done and reaches right into my heart with it's poignant lesson. Congratulations on your first place win! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I am so happy about this!
Date: 12/23/2020 11:22:00 AM
So beautiful Caren and so touching. You have reached into the human experience of wishing we had done or said something different. This is so well done and reaches right into my heart with it's poignant lesson. Congratulations on your first place win! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam. What a wonderful surprise!
Date: 12/23/2020 9:07:00 AM
This is such an emotional write, Caren. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Jenna. This made me really happy!
Date: 12/23/2020 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Caren....sentiments beautifully described.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Carol. I appreciate it.
Date: 12/23/2020 7:31:00 AM
Last two lines hit hard, Caren. Wonderful story. I have felt Gods touch a few times in my life and have always to answer his call. I had never had none of them turn me down for a caring hug. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I have to say I should listen more than I do.
Date: 12/23/2020 6:54:00 AM
Why to go Caren Great Job!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Bobby. Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/23/2020 6:00:00 AM
This is such a blessing and so true... I know I've failed him many times because I didn't listen to that still, small voice. God B L E S S you and CONGRATS on your top win
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Regina. What a great surprise!
Date: 12/23/2020 5:39:00 AM
Dear Caren, I thoroughly enjoyed your entry. So many times we hear that calling but walk on, as humans we don't trust the voice inside at times, thank you for writing this beautiful heart felt story , congratulations on your 1st place win. Love and light, Your Mystic R.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/23/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Mystic Rose Rose. I was really thrilled to see this! I feel very honored my friend. Merry Christmas!

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