Njeri Hunjeri Poet Rhyme

Never Say Never

Why I took him back.....after all that hurt
Why i've had a change of heart
Thou this one I wanted to dart
I did not want history to steal this art 

So I opened the curtain and let the light in, which took more than a glance
Then I proceeded to open the window to let the fresh air dance
After opening the window, the birds and butterflies came in, couldn't miss a chance
The scent of the fresh flowers breezed in without tense
And there I sat smiling at the skies, pure with romance

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Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2015 at 7:58 AM I miss your visits Njeri. Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 12:48 PM Hi Richard. I will come visit. am trying to reply to all my comments before I post any other poems or visit other peoples. I always feel terrible if I have poems that I haven't replied too. but I promise ill b visiting soon:-)

Ian Jones July 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM I enjoyed this write and hope you don't mind me getting on my soap box again. If a relationship fails and breaks up there is a good reason and splitting up should only be done when every other attempt to rescue has failed, not in temper or on a whim. The problem is that if this is the case, what was wrong before remains wrong still so watch out. Kind regards, Ian Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:39 AM I dont mind at all Ian. Thank you for your wise words

Afolabi Muideen July 26, 2015 at 4:10 AM An excellence penned, I love your write. I also sat smiling as I'm reading your piece ........A.M. Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:38 AM That's nice...thank you A.M

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 3:15 AM enjoyed your write :) ~S.K.A.T. Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:37 AM Thank you SKAT

Lindsay Laurie July 25, 2015 at 7:49 PM G'day njeri... enjoyed the contrast of your two verses in this poem; the first with some regret, and the second with a glimmer of hope - thanks you njeri - Lindsay Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:36 AM Thank you Lindsay for your sweet words

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2015 at 7:14 PM The good thing about the window, is that you have a way to escape if he turns out to be a jerk. Sorry I couldn't resist. You deserve a man who will treat you like a princess! Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:35 AM I love that! Thank you Richard

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 4:24 PM Love the title and the sentiment in the poem - when you let the light in you see a different perspective on life and it is time to forgive:-) hugs jan xx7 Njeri Hunjeri September 17, 2015 at 3:34 AM Thank you Jan for your sweet words