B S Sky Poet Rhyme

Never Quit

Never Quit

If you broken like tamarind stick
ONCE
Try not quitting your pleasurable life
PLEASE
Think about it positively many times.

Dear why you thinking to quit
JUST
Down to shame, regrets and discomfort
HAVE
Hope and try your level best to get a reward.


If not believe these smiling words
THEN
Open your ears and get this lesson
INSIDE
Many quit when they were close to success.

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Beata Agustin June 28, 2024 at 6:46 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 4:15 PM balbir, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA