Never Number One

Perhaps, 
   there are just too many 
   writers of poetry out there,
   I have read their poems with joy and sadness.
Gathering their thoughts and parlaying them
  to images seen and postulated
  with the eyes closed shut but seeing
  life in their embellished dreams.
When I was a child of nine or ten
  I longed to be a writer of  sorts,
  visionary, ingenious provocateur, 
  storyteller, unraveler for and of the times.
So many others beat me to it,
   displaying my words with a better grace
   and said what was on my mind, 
   beating in my heart, living in my soul
spoken well, far better 
   and more eloquently
   than I could.

Never number one,
   always second, third or more
   still, some inner need 
   forces me to keep trying.
Therein lies the me, 
   determined and persistent
   as with life, ever moving forward, 
   looking for just a little more.
Corinthians 9:24 clearly states
  "Do you not know that in a race all the runners run,
   but only one receives the prize?
   Run in such a way as to take the prize."
So I'm running 
   as fast as I can
   hoping and trying always 
   to become number one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hlabisa Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 10:02 AM
It is this persistence and determination that will make you number 1. Lovely write indeed :-)
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:42 PM
One is the loneliest number and always stands by itself fighting to stay on top. We are all one in God's eyes.
Babbit Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 5:12 PM
What a wonderful perspective. Thank you.
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