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The palms whistled in the wind, as waves rolled onto shore The path of moonlight shimmered, we wanted nothing more We laughed as we dodged the moving water on the sand Engaging smiles in the night, as you gently held my hand We were free as each flying seagull, not missing a beat We held each other in darkness, overcoming daylight heat Then you reached down, picked up a seashell just for me You looked at me and told me to hold it from this memory - I knew this was more than anything could cost - - For this love to eternity will never be lost - Heidi Sands 2/21/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 3/1/2024 2:39:00 PM
Great poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The rhyming couplet sequencing is dynamic. Keep up the fantastic work. Please have a great day, and God's blessings always!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. It is nice to hear from you and I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you have a nice evening . Blessings :)
Date: 2/27/2024 11:20:00 PM
Oh my gosh Heidi, this is so beautiful. A fave for me. I love it so much.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2024 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much BJ. I am happy to see your kind comment and appreciate the Fave too. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/27/2024 3:25:00 PM
beautifully written, and touching words, love is eternal, thanks poet
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment and you are welcome :)
Date: 2/27/2024 11:11:00 AM
Heidi, your work shines with creativity, brilliance, and poetic skill. In the verses, a delicate apathy illustrates the heart of this passionate moment. Similar to a seashell's humble gift, there is a deep display of simple dedication. Each line exudes captivating elegance. A fave
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2024 11:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words today. I appreciate your input and also the Fave too. I hope all is well and you have a beautiful day :)
Date: 2/26/2024 8:08:00 PM
So romantic, so intimate. This is really a gem, Heidi. A privilege to read. Thanks, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2024 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/23/2024 10:30:00 AM
Heidi, there is a sweet innocence in your words of this romantic interlude. And, like the simple gift of the shell, there is a beautiful gift of simple commitment. Such grace in each line! So happy I found this loveliness today! Blessings and continued prayers! Think of you often in prayer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 11:03:00 AM
It is so nice to see your comment on this today. I am happy to hear that and thank you for keeping me in your prayers. So needed and appreciated. Blessings. :)
Date: 2/22/2024 10:06:00 PM
It touches my heart to read this poem. The simplicity and innocence of love is well defined.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 2:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Hilda :)
Date: 2/22/2024 1:55:00 PM
I enjoyed this lovely romantic write Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 2:48:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this. hugs :)
Date: 2/22/2024 11:59:00 AM
Splendid romantic poem. Enjoyed.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 2:47:00 AM
Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 2/22/2024 8:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Never Lost" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2024 8:57:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Paula. I hope you have a nice day. Blessings :)
Date: 2/22/2024 5:36:00 AM
You have treasured the moments, my friend--how beautifully romantic this poem is! Endearing vibes emanate from your beloved memories, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2024 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay . I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/21/2024 5:50:00 PM
Aw this is so romantic and beautiful I just love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2024 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Karen. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 2/21/2024 5:50:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Heidi. Filled with romance and imagery. I enjoyed reading this. Have a blessed day, my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2024 8:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Jerry . I am happy you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/21/2024 4:34:00 PM
a lovely romance poem, Heidi. I loved this line: Then you reached down, picked up a seashell just for me The last two lines, though, touched me, for they reminded me of when hubby and I met...I knew it was more than a chance meeting...our love has been eternal and will never be lost. Enjoyed your words this evening, Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2024 8:53:00 AM
Hi Sara. Thank you for your kind comment. I am happy it brought you special memories . I always appreciate your positive feedback :)
Date: 2/21/2024 3:43:00 PM
Very smooth romance read! Have a nice day ~ AA
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2024 3:46:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind comment :)

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