Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Never Lost

The palms whistled in the wind, as waves rolled onto shore
The path of moonlight shimmered, we wanted nothing more
We laughed as we dodged the moving water on the sand
Engaging smiles in the night, as you gently held my hand
We were free as each flying seagull, not missing a beat
We held each other in darkness, overcoming daylight heat
Then you reached down, picked up a seashell just for me
You looked at me and told me to hold it from this memory
        -  I knew this was more than anything could cost - 
              -  For this love to eternity will never be lost - 

Heidi Sands

2/21/24

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Joseph Spence Sr March 1, 2024 at 2:39 PM Great poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The rhyming couplet sequencing is dynamic. Keep up the fantastic work. Please have a great day, and God's blessings always! Heidi Sands March 1, 2024 at 2:49 PM Thank you Joseph. It is nice to hear from you and I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you have a nice evening . Blessings :)

Bj Legros Kelley February 27, 2024 at 11:20 PM Oh my gosh Heidi, this is so beautiful. A fave for me. I love it so much. Heidi Sands February 28, 2024 at 11:04 AM Thank you so much BJ. I am happy to see your kind comment and appreciate the Fave too. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Yann Rolland February 27, 2024 at 3:25 PM beautifully written, and touching words, love is eternal, thanks poet Heidi Sands February 27, 2024 at 4:19 PM Thank you for your kind comment and you are welcome :)

Sotto Poet February 27, 2024 at 11:11 AM Heidi, your work shines with creativity, brilliance, and poetic skill. In the verses, a delicate apathy illustrates the heart of this passionate moment. Similar to a seashell's humble gift, there is a deep display of simple dedication. Each line exudes captivating elegance. A fave Heidi Sands February 27, 2024 at 11:40 AM Thank you for your kind words today. I appreciate your input and also the Fave too. I hope all is well and you have a beautiful day :)

Gershon Wolf February 26, 2024 at 8:08 PM So romantic, so intimate. This is really a gem, Heidi. A privilege to read. Thanks, Gershon Heidi Sands February 27, 2024 at 4:29 AM Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sam Kauffman February 23, 2024 at 10:30 AM Heidi, there is a sweet innocence in your words of this romantic interlude. And, like the simple gift of the shell, there is a beautiful gift of simple commitment. Such grace in each line! So happy I found this loveliness today! Blessings and continued prayers! Think of you often in prayer. Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 11:03 AM It is so nice to see your comment on this today. I am happy to hear that and thank you for keeping me in your prayers. So needed and appreciated. Blessings. :)

Hilda Greenhough February 22, 2024 at 10:06 PM It touches my heart to read this poem. The simplicity and innocence of love is well defined. Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 2:49 AM Thank you very much Hilda :)

Joseph May February 22, 2024 at 1:55 PM I enjoyed this lovely romantic write Heidi, hugs Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 2:48 AM Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this. hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar February 22, 2024 at 11:59 AM Splendid romantic poem. Enjoyed. Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 2:47 AM Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2024 at 8:42 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely "Never Lost" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away.......... Heidi Sands February 22, 2024 at 8:57 AM I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Paula. I hope you have a nice day. Blessings :)

Vijay Pandit February 22, 2024 at 5:36 AM You have treasured the moments, my friend--how beautifully romantic this poem is! Endearing vibes emanate from your beloved memories, Heidi. Heidi Sands February 22, 2024 at 8:56 AM Thank you so much Vijay . I hope you have a nice day :)

Karen Jones February 21, 2024 at 5:50 PM Aw this is so romantic and beautiful I just love it! Heidi Sands February 22, 2024 at 8:55 AM Thank you Karen. I am happy to hear that :)

Jerry Brotherton February 21, 2024 at 5:50 PM A wonderful poem, Heidi. Filled with romance and imagery. I enjoyed reading this. Have a blessed day, my friend. Heidi Sands February 22, 2024 at 8:55 AM Thank you very much Jerry . I am happy you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice day :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 21, 2024 at 3:43 PM Very smooth romance read! Have a nice day ~ AA Heidi Sands February 21, 2024 at 3:46 PM Thank you. I appreciate your kind comment :)