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Never Losing Sight Of You

Never Losing Sight Of  You 
Telescopic moments in full view 
seen through the senses of a gathering flute
I remember the fresh linen scent of water 
the herbal essence of blossoming trees 
The way your white beard caressed me,  
like the whispering winds of, ...slow time

Meditative apparatuses, (pause) none 
only the sound of your breath as you exhaled 
brought the instrument to life..
As the orbs circled your frame you swirled
into oblivion,
leaving me sitting there 
                            like a wisp of a breeze 
                            a tendril of smoke
                            a shred of light 
I listened to your melody from a bird's eye view  
floating up, never losing sight of you.

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Regina Mcintosh Date: 1/19/2025 12:31:00 PM Oh, I love this. God bless you always. love, Gina Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/16/2025 8:02:00 PM Your description sounds like Aldo, love does float through our veins to watch and admire. Blessings my friend Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/17/2025 9:12:00 AM thank you for dropping by Eve, I pray your well and writing poetry still :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2025 10:41:00 AM WOW!!! What a lovely write you have here. What A Great Ending... Have a fun day writing away.............. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/17/2025 9:14:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem Paula, have a great day

Yann Rolland Date: 1/16/2025 2:04:00 AM so romantic and elegant poem, enjoyed Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/17/2025 9:15:00 AM Thanks for your kind visit Yann

Jay Narain Date: 1/15/2025 10:50:00 AM Musical romantic poem. Nice. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/15/2025 3:29:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit Jay

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/15/2025 7:55:00 AM i like the rhythmic flow of your romantic words, vie...stellar write! Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/15/2025 3:29:00 PM glad you enjoyed it Nette

Zyrool Gifford Date: 1/15/2025 5:29:00 AM Beautifully written and a lovely read, Rose. Have a wonderful day my friend. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/15/2025 3:28:00 PM Thank you for reading Zyrool

Deb M Date: 1/14/2025 1:24:00 PM Very beautiful Rose….a lovely calming vibe! Debx Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/14/2025 6:46:00 PM thank you for reading and commenting. time is precious so I appreciate !