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When I opine back, I recall a forlorn mood. An honest child, loaded with hopes and wound, The flame of a grown-up has washed away. Most people voiced their craving for disarray. I've never heard of them asking for a reward. Aiming for a judicial affair or an inner accord. They would coercively sustain if I didn't work. They said I was fortunate to produce a spark. Helpless souls have failed to focus on avidity. Look at your thoughts and draw the inadequacy. Set forth an endeavor not to yield to cynicism! Strain not to accept less than your sybaritism! Don't become distracted by your aim. Refuse to be dragged down by claim.
Written: October 19, 2021

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Date: 10/20/2021 6:21:00 AM
Amazing Sonnet, Lasaad, from sad to positive. Love it.
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Date: 10/20/2021 2:42:00 AM
Great sonnet that needs to be read carefully. A contrast of the past, present and your aim to a better future.
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