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Never Let Her Slip Away

You’ve found the one you were looking for Never let her slip away When true love comes knocking at your door Never let her slip away Tell her how you really feel Never let her slip away Cherish her to your dying day Never let her slip away You only get one chance in life Never let it slip away Jan Allison 13th August 2013

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/13/2014 11:18:00 PM

Reminds me of a show tune - I believe it was from "The King and I" which was called "Some Enchanted Evening". Same theme as your poem - and the some powerful meaning. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2014 1:57:00 AM

Oh I know that one Matthew its a beautiful song:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2014 12:42:00 PM

now this should be the anthem of all guys.. beautifully rendered, jan... reminds of the song from the same title.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:11:00 PM

The song inspired me Nette - I often get inspiration from music:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Leslie Philibert

Date: 8/13/2014 11:44:00 AM

nice romantic verse

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:11:00 PM

thanks for dropping by Leslie:-) Hugs Jan xx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/13/2014 11:19:00 AM

So profound. This is very well said Jan. Jim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:10:00 PM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Jim:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ara Belle

Date: 8/13/2014 10:27:00 AM

Awww, Jan.. this is very nice.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:10:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Arabelle:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jim Carpenter

Date: 8/13/2014 10:09:00 AM

Somehow it sounds like catching Jello. The more you squeeze, the more it slips away... Great piece of work!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:09:00 PM

LOL thanks for the lovely comment Jim:-) Hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/13/2014 9:46:00 AM

Ah....wish it were that simple. At times...you try so hard to hold on...but they slip away anyway. Lovely write, my sweet. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Eileen:-) Hugs jan xxx

Phumlani Mthethwa

Date: 8/13/2014 8:08:00 AM

I'm holding on to her for dear life. Letting her go, not an option. Beautiful message, thank you for sharing

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment - when you find the right one never let go:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2014 7:50:00 AM

Hope there is more than one chance...or one chance per girl...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 7:54:00 AM

You will know when you meet someone if shes the right one for you my friend... then never let her slip away :-) Hugs Jan

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/13/2014 7:50:00 AM

I will never you let you slip away, you are such a good person, a thousand hugs :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 7:53:00 AM

Aww Casarah you have made my day with that lovely comment:-) I would so so love the chance to meet up - maybe one day my dream will come true and then I can read Abby stories:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ochieng Adipo

Date: 8/13/2014 7:32:00 AM

Wonderful poem. Simple yet deep message communicated beautifully!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment - i was listening to a song by Andrew Gold and it inspired me:-) Hugs jan xxxx