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Never In Focus

Try to photograph
You come out as colored blur
Never in focus

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Contest: Any haiku will do
9th place win

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:12:00 AM

DEEP... SK

Robin Davis

Date: 5/3/2014 9:48:00 PM

Dr. Ram There is so much meaning in this nice little write. A poem filled with deepness and thought. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.

Evrod Samuel

Date: 10/19/2013 8:28:00 AM

I like this one..made me laugh.....I like haikus as thay are so short

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/25/2013 11:41:00 AM

Dr Ram enthralling Haiku congrats on placing Shadow x smile

Joseph May

Date: 9/25/2013 7:05:00 AM

congrats on your win Dr. Mehta

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 6:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu

Date: 9/25/2013 3:45:00 AM

"Never in focus" that's deep...congrats on your win! ^_^ Y.L.N

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:52:00 PM

I like this one! Congrats for your win.

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 5:56:00 PM

nice win............SKAT

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/13/2013 3:36:00 PM

Very good poem! Sometimes it does take a lot of focus for us to clearly see what is most important in life. Great work on this poem! I liked it, I am also a fan of photography, which also takes quite a bit of focus! :)...Thank you for the nice comments! I really appreciate it!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 3:51:00 AM

I like this Haiku. Well expressed. Sometimes to see clearly we've got to just step back and be still, taking in our surroundings. My thoughts wander with this one. Love it. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2013 11:24:00 PM

Hi, Dr. Ram. I hope to keep seeing you posting your own work here! Like this one!