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Never Going To Drag Me Down

I so don’t have time for nonsense You’ve gotta want to help yourself Do you really want to sit and stagnate In your pool of negativity and pessimism There are kind people passing you on either side While you are busy harping on the gloom and doom You’re not noticing or hearing any of them Do you really want to close your eyes And not see any positive around you There’s beauty all around you You’re creating your world through your perception Your reality is so off balance Won’t you step back Take a deep breath And open up Look for what’s beautiful What’s bright and happy What’s warm and kind Realize that there’s something else out there You’ve got to want to help yourself AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on October 11, 2017 for contest NEVER GOING TO DRAG ME DOWN sponsored by JULIE LEIGH RODEHEAVER - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 11/5/2017 4:47:00 PM
That is a great poem with a good message for anyone that needs it. This poem shows strength. Have a niceevening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2017 10:38:00 AM
yes i agree with what you have said. have a nice day my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/5/2017 5:37:00 PM
It felt good writing this because it's not always appropriate to come right out and lecture someone even if it's for their own good... ;-)
Date: 10/17/2017 11:44:00 PM
Very nicely done, Line - kudos and cheers on your well-deserved win, dear poet - keep writing strong! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/18/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory. Love to get your comments. Have a spectacular week!

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