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Never Ending Nightmare

Don't leave me, The dawn is too close, Can't you see me, I have a theory to propose, My dreams go forever, My heart never stops, To the end of the world, Make the people drop, And commend, My work, That makes amends, Stop the nonsense, Skip to the end, The nightmare lives on, Impossible to mend.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/9/2024 2:03:00 PM

beautifully penned, kept me reading to the very end- nice job

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 5/9/2024 5:40:00 AM

Good Morning Forever Dreaming! Never-ending Nightmare was one of your BRILLIANTS! Keep it going! Love this! I will return! VBR Black Panther! Jet Blackest ANSWERERRR! Malik Mali Mali! Val

ThoughtsFrom B4

Date: 5/7/2024 10:25:00 AM

I feel you... well penned

Frank Black Blacharczyk

Date: 5/7/2024 6:40:00 AM

It is well crafted where each line leads to something new you take us from what you would like to what is real...

Hugo Sarvida Jr.

Date: 5/7/2024 5:23:00 AM

First, thanks for your comment on my Camping haiku. I think in this poem, you have this unreleased scary experience in your subconscious that every time you fall asleep it keeps on lingering in your dreams. If you may, take a yoga class or something mental wellness that would help you release that something nightmarish in you. By the way, nice imaginative poem.

Forever Dreaming
Date: 5/7/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thanks, I am in a good mental state, I do not resonate with this poem in a scary way, I just wrote this because I know many other people do, thanks for looking out for me though, and congrats for leading Top 100 Most poems recent!