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Never Apart

The arrow went straight through my heart. Like me and you it split apart in two. I will never forget the memories we shared, from the day we paired…. To the days you comforted me when I was scared. to the days where you held me when i was cold, or a victim of scold. Not a single tear falls upon my face. It’s not worth the pain and tears. No reason to runaway. I have to face my fears. I stay in one place. I’ll only move no faster than a standing boulder. I make my choice and stick to it. You had your chance to rejoice. You say your shoulder is free… every time I rest my head I feel as if I get stung by a bee. The stinger never comes apart. Strong and sharp. Moving on, much to look for ahead. No place to rest my head. I have made my thoughts said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 2:56:00 PM
Hi Jasmine would you like help labeling your forms? so you don't need to put I don't know? This poems form is RHYME. Light & Love
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:43:00 PM
Creative and interesting write on Never apart, jasmine
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:27:00 PM
a deep write, a strong person that is to know a shoulder is just a shoulder it's not always there especially in the times of need,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:33:00 PM
The descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry are not bad. This looks like a decent entry.
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