Neutrino (The Curse and the Cure)

attach my thougths
signal my intentions
*****
the measure of my glance
cast upon chance
according to fate
****
never stopping
never stopping
sub-atomic
whispers
***
hurting
more
than
before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 13, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Jim, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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April 13, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Soup, Jimbo..Hope all is well and that you're keeping warm up there! Always, Annalise
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March 17, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Such strength in a short breath.
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