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Return 
to the fresh ocean,
without tears of the storm.

stormhaiku

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Shadow Hamilton

November 15, 2014 at 1:37 AM

congrats on being featured hugs 5/8/5 syllables for a haiku though

Paul Callus

October 27, 2014 at 5:03 PM

Van Yan...Pan; could be Peter Pan !! :) Timothy Hicks is a clever 20 year old writer; do look him up; he is sincere, friendly and could be helpful, too. Best of luck. // paul

Van Yan

October 27, 2014 at 5:04 PM

Thanks very much!

Paul Callus

October 27, 2014 at 4:39 PM

Hi Van...you could call it free verse; it might also be a kind of modern haiku.

Van Yan

October 27, 2014 at 4:41 PM

OK, thanks! Could you introduce me more youth poets as like me? Van Yan is my pen name and you can call me Peter. Van Yan

Paul Callus

October 26, 2014 at 6:17 AM

Hi Van Yan! This poem might not be a tanka as we know it, but the poem in itself is as fresh as the ocean. Hope you'll enjoy your stay on Soup! // paul

Van Yan

October 26, 2014 at 7:15 PM

So what kind of poem do you think it is? I am a Chinese poet and when I translated it into English I do not know what type it is.

Van Yan

October 26, 2014 at 9:28 AM

Yes, I know. I just want to find a form suitable cuz I translate my poem from Chinese into English.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2014 at 5:36 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Van- I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Van Yan

October 26, 2014 at 9:30 AM

I will. Thanks!