Nether Nether Land

first last and always
                        to be conquered

                     the breeding ground
                     



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Gondolf Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:36 AM
First last and always. A cleverly written poem, Maureen. Hugs, John
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November 26, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you John :) xomo!
Foster Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 11:47 AM
yes... Excellent. Ann
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November 21, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Thank you Ann! ;), xomo!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:48 AM
I wonder if the tables have perhaps turned. This causes one to think as to who is the conquered.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:53 AM
A matriarchy is not a hierarchy, you have no need to fear ;),
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Ha ha, the captcha code was ED2
May Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Very creative write Mo...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Thank you Joseph, xomo
One Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 12:27 PM
But i dont drink... ';)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Then we'll do it sober ~x
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:42 AM
A thought-provoking poem, MM! As long as happiness lay there, then it's the right ground for commitment. Very cool poem! Love and peace forever.
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November 18, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Freddie, I am blessed by your comments my friend, you are most appreciated. Warm hugs and love, xomo
One Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 2:00 PM
oooh this is clever... however, i know some that have not been conquered.. nuns :)
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November 18, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Thank you ;), ...that's a conversation over a bottle of wine ~xomo <3
Trifiatis Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:24 AM
...fertile poetry that feeds the heart and mind dearest, Maureen! Hugs xxx
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November 17, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Hugs and love, xomo!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:23 AM
The last line had me smiling thinking many thoughts, not all the same.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Goodie! I like my poems to say the most they can. Thank you my friend! xomo
Kiser Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Ooh cleverly done.
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November 13, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Thank you M! xomo
Connelly Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:17 PM
Maureen I've read every recent poem you've written, and every now and again, go back and randomly pick a page of yours and then read a poem because the title makes me curious; but I have to say, and I hope we can have an open discussion, I'm not sure what this poem means. Is it about people intermixing genetically? For I think it was Orwell that said, first remove their history. Then compare religion with yours that is more superior. Lastly breed your own society. It's faster than evolution.
Connelly Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 3:31 AM
Thank you for the understanding Maureen.
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November 13, 2019 at 8:09 PM
I was musing about the nether region as not yet completely discovered land and the control over women's bodies. This wasn't quite the poem I set out to write, muses are funny that way, and Orwell isn't far off either. ;),
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Your work is always so creative. When you write, I read. : ) very cool my friend.
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November 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM
My muse and my madness are humbled by your audience my friend; thank you. xomo <3
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