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Nether Nether Land

first last and always to be conquered the breeding ground ***

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John Gondolf

Date: 11/24/2019 11:36:00 AM

First last and always. A cleverly written poem, Maureen. Hugs, John

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/26/2019 2:02:00 PM

Thank you John :) xomo!

Ann Foster

Date: 11/20/2019 11:47:00 AM

yes... Excellent. Ann

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/21/2019 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Ann! ;), xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/20/2019 8:48:00 AM

I wonder if the tables have perhaps turned. This causes one to think as to who is the conquered.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/20/2019 8:53:00 AM

A matriarchy is not a hierarchy, you have no need to fear ;),

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2019 8:49:00 AM

Ha ha, the captcha code was ED2

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2019 2:07:00 PM

Very creative write Mo...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/19/2019 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Joseph, xomo

Silent One

Date: 11/18/2019 12:27:00 PM

But i dont drink... ';)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/19/2019 7:08:00 AM

Then we'll do it sober ~x

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/18/2019 3:42:00 AM

A thought-provoking poem, MM! As long as happiness lay there, then it's the right ground for commitment. Very cool poem! Love and peace forever.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/18/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Freddie, I am blessed by your comments my friend, you are most appreciated. Warm hugs and love, xomo

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2019 2:00:00 PM

oooh this is clever... however, i know some that have not been conquered.. nuns :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/18/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you ;), ...that's a conversation over a bottle of wine ~xomo <3

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/17/2019 3:24:00 AM

...fertile poetry that feeds the heart and mind dearest, Maureen! Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/17/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend, Hugs and love, xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/14/2019 12:23:00 AM

The last line had me smiling thinking many thoughts, not all the same.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/14/2019 7:06:00 AM

Goodie! I like my poems to say the most they can. Thank you my friend! xomo

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/13/2019 5:42:00 PM

Ooh cleverly done.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/13/2019 8:13:00 PM

Thank you M! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/13/2019 5:17:00 PM

Maureen I've read every recent poem you've written, and every now and again, go back and randomly pick a page of yours and then read a poem because the title makes me curious; but I have to say, and I hope we can have an open discussion, I'm not sure what this poem means. Is it about people intermixing genetically? For I think it was Orwell that said, first remove their history. Then compare religion with yours that is more superior. Lastly breed your own society. It's faster than evolution.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/14/2019 3:31:00 AM

Thank you for the understanding Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/13/2019 8:09:00 PM

I was musing about the nether region as not yet completely discovered land and the control over women's bodies. This wasn't quite the poem I set out to write, muses are funny that way, and Orwell isn't far off either. ;),

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 2:10:00 PM

Your work is always so creative. When you write, I read. : ) very cool my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/13/2019 2:13:00 PM

My muse and my madness are humbled by your audience my friend; thank you. xomo <3