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Nestling Upon the Snow

Nestling upon the snow, puss peeks over the soft
dusty snow, as sparkling snowflake spiral and fall
upon her long fur sending her spirits aloft.

She has the most expressive face and yet so small,
her bright emerald eyes look up while the wind whipped
dusty snow, as sparkling snowflake spiral and fall.

Puss white downy fur was hard to see as she dipped
a labyrinth path around the powdery fluff,
her bright emerald eyes look up while the wind whipped.

Puss breasted the numbing air with breath of white puffs.
Wind swooshes through with an intent chill as it jests
a labyrinth path around the powdery fluff.

Thrilled of first falling snow she frolics in more quests.
Trailing behind a thread of white from bush and tree
wind swooshes through with an intent chill as it jests.

Puss dashes out to the backyard so she may see.
Nestling upon the snow, puss peeks over the soft
trailing behind a thread of white from bush and tree
upon her long fur sending her spirits aloft.





11/21/2017

12 syllable count
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sathasivam Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:52 AM
Excellent. Lovely imagery write with penned well. Thanks for sharing it
Warrior Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:25 AM
A puss in the snow...buurrr, burr, purr...a lovely feline write Eve...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:02 AM
So so beautiful Eve
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Lovely imagery!
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:01 AM
what a charming poem Eve and I love the picture too:-) hugs jan xx
One Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 5:42 AM
This is lovely Eve...
Vaso Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Such a sweet a lovely poem!!!! We had first snow few days ago!!! :)
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