Nestled In Daydreams

I'm nestled in daydreams, safely tucked in a halcyon haven away from the stress that greedily feasts on me like a raven My Utopian realm offers a peaceful kingdom; a sanctuary where there is no arguing with any acrimonious adversary I take flight to a lowland vale, with gardens in full bloom safe from life's burdens, as if I'm still inside my natal womb Fields of wildflowers and carpets of moss are my landscape Orchard of grape vines and a citrus grove is where I escape Showers and sunshine are nuanced in my Eden of tranquility I live harmoniously with forest animals in absolute affability Blue skies brighten every day, darkening to indigo each night Wrapped in my lover's arms, beneath stars and soft moonlight l live in a multi-level tree house, sprawled in a stand of pine My neighbors are feral mustangs; a roaming herd of equine I built a porch that overlooks the view of my pastoral land watching eagles as they hunt and soar with feathers fanned I watch each stained glass sunrise as it surfaces from the sea and each sunset, when dusk paints pastels with grand esprit No fence surrounds my oasis, no flashing lights or blaring horns and I've hybridized my roses, so no longer do they have thorns There's some sanctity to be found in a divine place like this One of spiritual symbiosis and a bounty of benevolent bliss There's no known place on Earth where everyone gets along but in my sanctum, no one ever tells me I'm too headstrong I long for a refuge where I can take ample time to just relax where I'll not be faced with the entity of fear, called parallax When fire storms of frustration blaze much too high to douse I'll be daydreaming while climbing the stairs to my tree house August 18th, 2020 Sanctuary Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent On
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. Daydreams are wonderful just like this write. Your last line, "I'll be daydreaming while climbing the stairs to my tree house," can I join you?????? Enjoy your win with blessings...........
Logan Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Yes, you may. Thank you, Paula.
Kauffman Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Ahh! Just delightful and so charming Jenna! I love the way you built the stairway to your "tree house." Wonderful last line. Makes me want to build a treehouse! Warmest wishes!
Logan Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:36 PM
I am remiss in not responding. Forgive me and thank you, Sam.
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:11 PM
How did I miss this one, Jenna?! Maybe out of jealousy: Can't climb the ladder/steps to a tree-house anymore, 'sadly.' At any rate, congratulations to you on a memorable write and a top winner in the 'Sanctuary' contest. Chutes and Ladders, Gershon
Logan Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Hi Gershon, I guess I missed seeing your comment sooner, so we're even. Thank you very much for the congrats on the Sanctuary contest. I'll have to rig up an elevator. Hugs.
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna, great imagery, rhyme, and flow. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:45 AM
Thanks so much, Eve.
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Lovely sanctuary Jenna. You have described such an alluring and inviting place of peace and solitude. Congratulations on your win!
Logan Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:44 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind comments, Sam.
Gondolf Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 6:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to all those who find refuge in their dreams. Congrats on your win, my dear friend. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, John.
One Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 5:46 AM
John Lennon said, 'you say I'm a dreamer, but Im not the only one.' Your poem describes the wonders of a sanctuary perfectly and flows and rhymes very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Logan Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:53 AM
I'm honored by your placement and very pleased with your words of appraisal. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM
- A truly beautiful daydream ... as a fairytale, Jenna :) - A wonderful poem, which deserves a top spot on the winner list ... good luck - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thank you for your generous comments on this one, Anne-Lise. They're valued.
Leffanta Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:19 AM
Sure beats up on the roof! Aloha! Rico
Logan Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 3:24 PM
You're as down with that as I am, Rico. Thanks for reading me.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 6:29 PM
A beautiful daydream. I would love to see wildflowers all over my moss covered yard!
Logan Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Wouldn't that make a wonderful place to call home? Thanks so much, Kim.
Ermine Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Absolute master! This is divine! Wonderful reading, ate it up.! Everyone is standing on that tree house porch with you. 'stained glass sunrise' is awesome. Top top write.
Logan Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 4:28 AM
Thanks for such wonderful comments, Sigrid.
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