Nessie

searching for her mate
a lone beast questions the moon…
replied in a flash
go nessie to your own time
where the world believes in you

© Harry J Horsman  2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Moorman Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Harry, I have always enjoyed your poetry and this is a prime example why!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 5:58 PM
I love this and can't believe I ever missed it!! BIG congrats,dear friend.
Haight Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 4:32 PM
I like the twist in your poem, Harry. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Smith Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Congrats Harry :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Heartwarming poem, Harry. Masterfully done. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Awesome write, Harry, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Daniel Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Great tanka, Harry:)
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 2:56 PM
- An exciting fable .... maybe it exists, Harry :))) - Well done - Luck in the contest :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Very nicely written, Harry. I felt a bit of melancholy here. Awesome.
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:00 PM
I like your interpretation harry--lovely imagination, my friend..best for a win.
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Great tanka Harry...
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January 6, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Wonderful Pen Harry! My best to you!
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