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'nessie'

It is a moonlit night
in my dream,
and the water is still with no ripples.

The Loch Ness is
a large, deep waterway
in the Scottish Highlands.
This is where
Nessie
lives, so it is said, anyways.

No one is really sure
if Nessie is for real or just folklore.
Some say
it is a hoax.
Some see a dragon creature or a serpent,
or perhaps a monster fish or a water beast,
but all affectionately call this creature, Nessie.
It is all very mysterious.
 
Since the Sixth Century,
to this very day
people have seen a creature
rising.  Did you know,
the Loch is ten thousand years old,
dating back to the Ice Age, and
frozen for twenty thousand years.

It is a moonlit night
in my dream,
and the water is still with no ripples.

Then, in silence a small black head rises
followed by a long neck and huge body.
I watch in my dream as Nessie swims 
under the full moon and hanging clouds,
as far off lightning flashes to Earth in the grey sky.

All is quiet and tranquil for Nessie, and my dream.

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December 15, 2017



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Swartz Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 11:36 PM
A great write about a creature I hope to find someday. Your dream is wonderful and written beautifully in honor of that magically hidden creature of the dark waters.
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:40 PM
How many stories from so many years, well done BW, best wishes...
Babcock Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 11:12 AM
A magical poem about Nessie. My massage therapist grew up on the Loch an said there have been many sightings of Nessie by the folks who live there. love phyl
Michael Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Yes, it is a wonder...Magical to say the least... All the best BW
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