Nervous Room

I lay flat before the bending , way 
past the break
Its a lot like love with that 
unusual sent , becoming 
vulnerable. Beside the notion 
against the hoursscattered , 
seconds which swril from 
focused beams of brutal bliss.
Casually confronted charging in 
and around odd ponders.
There`s a presence prescribed 
rising slow though sleek and 
steady. Welcome to the nervous 
room where our lightheadedness 
grows horribly heavy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 15, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Christopher, :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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May 5, 2014 at 2:04 PM
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