N'Er Will I See

Me thinks I can't breathe
without thine constant presence around me.
Thou hast erased my very being
when it's thine face n'er will I see.

Thou will n'er know my pain
in n'er seeing thee again.
It will be a constant strain
when it's thine face n'er will I see.

Thou will n'er be in my arms
and be filled with thine charms.
Thy life causes me great harm
when it's thine face n'er will I see.

Now thou knowest how much it hurts me
when it's thine face n'er will I see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Garg Avatar
November 22, 2008 at 8:40 PM
'when it's thine face n'er will I see.' is th clincher in your write. I do hate repeating but here it is beauty as emotions break to evaporate in a firm resolve. In true life I would say you should see the person if he loves you. One cannot fond love in crystal clear waters.
Puhi Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 2:08 PM
You capture and expell such expierence with this honesty. I admire it, highly. Great Write.
Haniff Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 1:57 PM
this poem is great. I really like it .keep up the good work Its really touching. I jus joined here and I findit a kool place.
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