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Neonate to Dotage

“Age merely shows what children we remain.” - Quote by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe --------------------------------------------------- charmingly weak, weakly charming begins life, begins cessation toothless smile, baby breath, wobbling charmingly weak, weakly charming true babyhood, true senescence depending, needy, demanding charmingly weak, weakly charming begins begin, begins ending

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David Crandall

Date: 1/20/2025 9:09:00 PM

I agree. I think I was thinking something similar in my poem Young and Old.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/21/2025 8:19:00 PM

I read 'young and old', similar thoughts different presentation! thank you dear poet.

David Crandall

Date: 1/20/2025 12:50:00 PM

Neonates and dotage - a lot in common!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/20/2025 8:44:00 PM

'a lot in common' yet so differently received don't you think? I do fear old age dear poet - lots of compromises to be made with our heart and still stay calm. your kind visit brings me joy, thank you.

Karen Jones

Date: 1/16/2025 12:06:00 AM

What a clever write and great idea! I love the quote! I can’t write in this form so I admire your skill dear poet. Well done.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 12:29:00 AM

Wow your first??? Amazing!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 1/16/2025 4:22:00 AM

ah! do you think so? thank you dear friend for your kind visit and cheerful words, means so much to me. my first triolet too dear poet! thank you.