Neon Rain

At last...
The cold, drizzling rains
Are letting up
And letting me out...
Weary legs need a stretch
So tired of wrestling
With things I cannot control

Out on an aimless walk
Confused and lost
Yet I know where I am
And that's the hardest part
And the hardest to forget...

The night and the city
Tries to help...
Bright flashing signs
High and out of sight
To these damp eyes
And still I see them
Their faded colors
Splashed on the sidewalk 
...neon rain...
Has been falling for days
Stray drops attempt to tickle
Down the nape of my neck
In an effort to cheer me up
...would be nice tonight...

I go looking unconsciously 
For a sure thing...
The harsh reds and yellows
Do nothing to pull me in
Only the comfort of blue
Flickering diner lights
And steamy bowls and mugs
...I could use a drink
Of something warm...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Boy Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 9:39 AM
A very soothing read well done. I could visualize the neon lights with you. I too have to get out whenever possible in this crazy times we live in
Deschler Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Thank you ... and yes, nature has it's own way of easing our stresses :)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Nice interesting way you muse, rain can be a fun change, and how you express it all superbly is captivating. The title is fantastic. Kudos. .......... ,............. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest piece, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below the poem so you will confirm the matter further.
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, as always... I will gladly stop by to read your latest works :)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Nice piece Kelly, very well penned indeed. Trust all is well with you, Blessings,Gordon
Deschler Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Gordon
Mcguire Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Absolutely well written! Love it! A fav for me.
Deschler Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thank you for the fav, my friend :)
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