Nellie's Villanelle

Nellie’s Villanelle

She closed her eyes and dreamt of love refrains
As in a poem the words she chose to write
With words that flow with ease as steady rain


To emulate the famous bards of yore
She released the Muse from her inner core
She closed her eyes and dreamt of love refrains


Her constant struggle grappling with her brain
To find a verse despite her mental drain
With words that flow with ease as steady rain


Love has entered as her prose progressed
with mixed emotions such as joy and pain
She closed her eyes and dreamt of love refrains


The premise of the poem began with love
and altered as the mood began to wane
with words that flow with ease as steady rain


With brillance she has wrought a work of art
A  Villanelle completed with her heart 
She closed her eyes and dreamt of love refrains
 With words that flow with ease as steady rain

June 14, 2015  Villanelle Contest   Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 9:26 PM
A beautiful poem, Ralph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 1:53 AM
beautifully penned Ralph I found this form so difficult to get to grips with - don't think I will write another lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Jan, It's my second one.
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Ralph, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
Sergi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Thank you, SKAT
A   Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Ralph, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
Sergi Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:54 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem!
Sergi Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Hi Richard: I changed the LAST line.!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Great write Ralph! Big congrats!
Sergi Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma
La France Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Ralph great poem for the contest 7
Sergi Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Thank you, BW YOU ARE VERY KIND.
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 2:28 AM
WOW, that is amazing, I hope my entry is as good as yours
Sergi Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Thanks again , Skat.
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