Neil Young At the Door

'You are like a hurricane

          There's calm in your eye

                    And I'm getting blown away'

	                        (Neil Young Like a Hurricane’)


his friends had given him their version of the weather report

gale force winds flood warning thunderstorms and destruction

she has done it before is a dreamer addict and rides on a broom 

close the shutters put a log on the fire and check the drain pipes


their advice sounded hollow for when a hard rain’s a gonna fall

blowing in the wind may be the better option than dying inside

he had no time for torrential tears and sounded the depth of her soul

filled with emotions as he searched for Atlantis at the shore of her eyes


mesmerised they made love in the beach hut of smooth drift wood

lay on sea grass and pebbles and embraced dolphins and star light

her broom was a sceptre of kindness and wielded naked compassion

passion and lust like a hurricane steadied their minds and cohabitation


calm and tranquil they glowed like the moon waxing and waning

as they sailed on pleasure love joy on winds and growth of change

the roof leaked but did not halt a wild wet and magical passage

of time surrender fulfilment and reincarnation of forgotten treasures


jellyfish sea-horses peace doves and a circling gull gave their blessing

shouted as by law of nature you must spread your wings and fly high

sand caressed their skin and ground away sadness sorrow and doubts

and the beacon of freedom watched over intuition courage and tides



'Take him by the hand
           
          Make him understand

                    The world on you depends

                             Our life will never end'
	
                                       (The Doors Riders on the Storms)


23rd October 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/23/2020 12:01:00 PM
Hello Kai, I enjoyed the poem. Neil Young is my fav. singer. the song I enjoy is harvest Moon. This is a different version of Neil Young. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:37:00 AM
lovely write and the opening and ending a very nice touch :)
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:03:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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