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Neighbor Is a Pirate

My neighbor is a pirate of fame Who sailed and pillaged from Maine to Spain. I once heard his old parrot mimic Phrases common to a pirate’s gimmick. I saw his long broadsword and musket Looking quite time-worn, used and rustic. He has a plumed hat, spy glass, boot scraps, Black eye patch, peg leg and treasure maps. My neighbor cannot shiver me spine, He is way too short and only nine. September 10, 2015

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Date: 2/10/2022 7:05:00 AM
A mood elevator! :) congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/9/2022 7:54:00 PM
Great revelation and fun at the last couplets. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2022 12:13:00 PM
This is really cute CayCay. Congratulations on your win. It is wonderful to see you back at PS again. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. You had me until the end. "only nine" Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 2/9/2022 8:19:00 AM
Sweet CayCay, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I love this Couplet filled with such vivid imagery and fun. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
This is really cute CayCay! Congrats on your win!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:01:00 AM
Hi, Tammy - good to hear from you. Thank you for leaving me a comment, I enjoyed reading it ... CayCay
Date: 9/14/2015 10:04:00 PM
CayCay I enjoyed reading your delightful write! Nice twist at the end. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:03:00 AM
Hi, Kim - I believe you are on my mental list of people whose poems I wish to visit. The list is longer than the day, but it is an enjoyable and inspiring way to spend time. Thank you for your kind words ... CayCay
Date: 9/14/2015 1:24:00 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:04:00 AM
Hey, Skat, thanks for dropping by with your kind comment ... CayCay
Date: 9/14/2015 7:49:00 AM
Made me giggle CayCay many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thank you, Jan - it did feel good to see my name among so many other creative writers. Thank you for taking the time to comment ... Blessings, CayCay
Date: 9/12/2015 2:59:00 PM
what I said below in my reply to your reply. I mean that i have used the same poem in other contests but not at the SAME TIME!
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Date: 9/12/2015 10:55:00 AM
Hey CayCay, stopped by for a visit. This is a wonderful couplet and I love the storyline imagery. Little ones do know how to make life fun, if we give them a chance. I love it and best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for the well wishes. It brings me joy that you found 'delight.' I am so glad you told me ... CayCay
Date: 9/11/2015 11:54:00 PM
hahaha, SO CUTE. you could probably put this in the pirate contest too!! Love your humor.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/12/2015 2:58:00 PM
Some people do it. I don't think I ever had the nerve to., haha
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:07:00 PM
Really, I can double dip? At the same time? Thank you for the uplifting comments ... CayCay
Date: 9/11/2015 7:29:00 PM
That was so cute, truly enjoyed!!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thank you much ... CayCay
Date: 9/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thanks for the correction on my Ramble on Justice. You were correct, the D was not supposed to be there. Glad I have one editor!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
Happy to be found helpful!! CayCay
Date: 9/11/2015 11:15:00 AM
I imagine a nine year old with pirate's play clothes, lol. Nice write. Good luck on your contest entrance. Thank you for visiting my poetry site. Glad you liked "Going Back In Time".
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:10:00 PM
You are welcome, I enjoyed visiting your page. I, too, imagined an 9-year old, my own son at that age loved costumes ... CayCay
Date: 9/11/2015 10:35:00 AM
How wonderful I enjoyed the read a winner for sure. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem , "Titles". Hugs Eve
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 12:11:00 PM
You are welcome, Eve - I'm sure I'll more down the road. I thank you for the encouraging words ... CayCay
Date: 9/10/2015 1:37:00 PM
Brilliant twist CayCay. I love what you've done here. Good rhyme/near rhyme scheme as well.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/10/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thank goodness for assonance and consonance, huh? I had a lot of fun with this and am delighted to receive your positive feedback ... CayCay
Date: 9/10/2015 11:15:00 AM
Living next door to Dennis the Menace? I really got a laugh out of this one. Good job.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/10/2015 12:22:00 PM
Total fiction, but it made you laugh so I succeeded. Thank you for letting me know ... CayCay

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