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Negligee

i shook it loose from the box the ribbon fell satin soft long would he gaze longingly at this honeymoon gift present in the moment fascinated at having a wife he could take his time his whole life 7/16/2020

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Date: 7/23/2020 7:42:00 PM
Fantastic slice of life Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 8:38:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/17/2020 9:12:00 PM
ooh la la. Is this for the Moment contest? I LIKES it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2020 9:38:00 PM
No but I’m glad you like it! Thank you :)
Date: 7/17/2020 2:04:00 PM
Hello Kim that is a lovely honeymoon gift. enjoy your day my friend. hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2020 5:21:00 PM
Hello kim, you are so welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2020 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene!
Date: 7/17/2020 12:18:00 PM
Giggles ;), great write! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thanks! xx
Date: 7/17/2020 11:13:00 AM
I always loved just saying the word negligee, a very sexy word. So is your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/17/2020 9:28:00 AM
Whew! Well-depicted! ... Eyes shut tight. ~ NBPTM (No Bigger Prude Than Me. lol).
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2020 11:00:00 AM
LOL...that’s okay. I appreciate it. Marriage love is the best.

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