Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Negligee

i shook it loose from the box
the ribbon fell
satin
soft
long
would he gaze
longingly
at
this
honeymoon
gift
present
in the moment
fascinated
at
having
a
wife
he could take his time
his
whole
life

7/16/2020

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Caren Krutsinger July 23, 2020 at 7:42 PM Fantastic slice of life Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 23, 2020 at 8:38 PM Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2020 at 9:12 PM ooh la la. Is this for the Moment contest? I LIKES it. Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2020 at 9:38 PM No but I’m glad you like it! Thank you :)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 17, 2020 at 2:04 PM Hello Kim that is a lovely honeymoon gift. enjoy your day my friend. hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu July 18, 2020 at 5:21 PM Hello kim, you are so welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2020 at 9:26 PM Thank you, Darlene!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 17, 2020 at 12:18 PM Giggles ;), great write! xomo Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2020 at 1:40 PM Thanks! xx

Kenneth Cheney July 17, 2020 at 11:13 AM I always loved just saying the word negligee, a very sexy word. So is your poem. Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2020 at 11:58 AM Thanks!

Gershon Wolf July 17, 2020 at 9:28 AM Whew! Well-depicted! ... Eyes shut tight. ~ NBPTM (No Bigger Prude Than Me. lol). Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2020 at 11:00 AM LOL...that’s okay. I appreciate it. Marriage love is the best.