Negative Love

Our eyes met 
Across the room
The sight of her
My heart went boom
 
Her shiny hair
Skin so fair
Slimline body
Shaped to stare
 
I introduce
Myself to her
Her accent sweet
Perfect purr
 
Drinks drunk
We make our leave
Joining hands
Like a weavers weave
 
Late night walk
Hand in hand
The talk is sweet
Of the loving kind
 
We stop and share
A dreamy kiss
As we read our minds
Eventful wish
 
Back at mine
I pour us drinks
Moet Champagne
To me she winks
 
Close we hold
Each others frame
Dancing slow
With this gorgeous dame
 
Adventurous hands
Explore each other
Naked flesh
Revealed from cover
 
As i hold her close
Her breasts charm me
Pert icons
Caress me
 
My manly hands
Run through her mane
Down her spine
To my wanting aim
 
Her curves so arced
Architectural gem
As she gently strokes
My wanting stem
 
She takes my hand
And sits me down
Astride my thighs
Slides on my crown
 
Slowly we share
Each others joy
As we pant and groan
This girl and boy
 
Throbbing bulge
Inside her heavenly cave
To adorn her walls
Our pulsing craves
 
I pull her in
As we release our flows
Joyous moans
As our bodies glow
 
We kiss and enjoy
Our united mix
As our tongues unite
With passioned slick
 
We share a shower
And lay down our heads
Cuddling close
In a silken bed
 
I awake in the morning
To a note left near
Beside the message
The drawing of a tear
 
Last night my dear
I was blessed like a dove
Your my one night stand
My negative love


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 6:09 PM
wonderful imagery James ... shame about the twist at the end - great write my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Jan, this is an old poem, hugs James xx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Ah this is such a beauty James, Congrats on ur win!
Fraser Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Many thanks Dr. Upma. Have a lovely weekend, James :) :)
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:08 PM
James. Congratulations on your HM -xox-SKAT
Fraser Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:56 PM
Thank you kindly SKAT, have a lovely weekend, James xox
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Love the oxymoronic title ,this is hot! excellent write. This is another favorite of mine! I love your writing!
Al-Riyami Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 3:44 PM
I hate one night stands-Can turn out bad
Yates Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 9:42 PM
Brilliant very beautiful with a touch of sorrow...
Mason Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 8:11 PM
I turned all my one-night-stands into husbands ... LOL ... don't know which is worse ... oh well, its only life ... smile ... Great imagery !!
Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 7:35 PM
The romance was marvelous James, but I hated the thought of you awaking to find such a note. How could anyone leave behind a man wish so much passion? Your "negative love" cannot hold a candle to the brightness of your heart. Beautiful poem! Love you, Carolyn
Chu Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Negative love is minus one. It was good but it's gone. The best things are short, bro. I relate. Good write.
Chircop Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:03 PM
it started so beautiful,but i hate the twist in the end,i wish all good things in life to you-wish you a fairytale ending,but that is positive love--my friend you manged to write negative love so beautiful--and passionarte-its going to my favs--charma:)
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 2:46 PM
I like your expressiveness. Really don't know about the negative love. Sara
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