Negative Love

Our eyes met 
Across the room
The sight of her
My heart went boom
 
Her shiny hair
Skin so fair
Slimline body
Shaped to stare
 
I introduce
Myself to her
Her accent sweet
Perfect purr
 
Drinks drunk
We make our leave
Joining hands
Like a weavers weave
 
Late night walk
Hand in hand
The talk is sweet
Of the loving kind
 
We stop and share
A dreamy kiss
As we read our minds
Eventful wish
 
Back at mine
I pour us drinks
Moet Champagne
To me she winks
 
Close we hold
Each others frame
Dancing slow
With this gorgeous dame
 
Adventurous hands
Explore each other
Naked flesh
Revealed from cover
 
As i hold her close
Her breasts charm me
Pert icons
Caress me
 
My manly hands
Run through her mane
Down her spine
To my wanting aim
 
Her curves so arced
Architectural gem
As she gently strokes
My wanting stem
 
She takes my hand
And sits me down
Astride my thighs
Slides on my crown
 
Slowly we share
Each others joy
As we pant and groan
This girl and boy
 
Throbbing bulge
Inside her heavenly cave
To adorn her walls
Our pulsing craves
 
I pull her in
As we release our flows
Joyous moans
As our bodies glow
 
We kiss and enjoy
Our united mix
As our tongues unite
With passioned slick
 
We share a shower
And lay down our heads
Cuddling close
In a silken bed
 
I awake in the morning
To a note left near
Beside the message
The drawing of a tear
 
Last night my dear
I was blessed like a dove
Your my one night stand
My negative love


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Date: 8/7/2015 6:09:00 PM
wonderful imagery James ... shame about the twist at the end - great write my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Jan, this is an old poem, hugs James xx
Date: 8/7/2015 1:30:00 AM
Ah this is such a beauty James, Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:55:00 PM
Many thanks Dr. Upma. Have a lovely weekend, James :) :)
Date: 8/6/2015 8:08:00 PM
James. Congratulations on your HM -xox-SKAT
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thank you kindly SKAT, have a lovely weekend, James xox
Date: 7/3/2009 8:44:00 PM
Love the oxymoronic title ,this is hot! excellent write. This is another favorite of mine! I love your writing!
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Date: 7/3/2009 3:44:00 PM
I hate one night stands-Can turn out bad
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Date: 7/2/2009 9:42:00 PM
Brilliant very beautiful with a touch of sorrow...
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Date: 7/2/2009 8:11:00 PM
I turned all my one-night-stands into husbands ... LOL ... don't know which is worse ... oh well, its only life ... smile ... Great imagery !!
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Date: 7/2/2009 7:35:00 PM
The romance was marvelous James, but I hated the thought of you awaking to find such a note. How could anyone leave behind a man wish so much passion? Your "negative love" cannot hold a candle to the brightness of your heart. Beautiful poem! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2009 4:58:00 PM
Negative love is minus one. It was good but it's gone. The best things are short, bro. I relate. Good write.
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Date: 7/2/2009 3:03:00 PM
it started so beautiful,but i hate the twist in the end,i wish all good things in life to you-wish you a fairytale ending,but that is positive love--my friend you manged to write negative love so beautiful--and passionarte-its going to my favs--charma:)
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Date: 7/2/2009 2:46:00 PM
I like your expressiveness. Really don't know about the negative love. Sara
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