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Needs new strategy

Feels herself falling to pieces
In a basket collects the shattered fragments
Fears she’s losing the battle



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:34 PM
how accurate your imagery is--been there, done that
Gauthier Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:25 PM
happy to say that was in a distant past ~
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