needless tension

someone attempts to cheat us
which we disallow 
tension heightens, tempers flare
harsh words are exchanged

hmmm

what could or should we have done
to offer a face saving route
to the wayward soul

we so reflect …
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Kauffman Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Seeker, what a perfect summation and reflection on those moments of conflict with another person. Those angry moments almost become an "ear worm" going round and round in our minds without resolution. These simple lines so reflect your understanding of the ways negative experiences influence our desire to reach "bliss" - moments that even disturb our sleep. And "so we reflect!" Thank you for this work of poetic art. Sending you blessings for calm in the chaos!
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July 18, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Ah yes, we can always ponder, what would an exalted master have done in a similar situation
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