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Needle In the Hay

I am a needle in the hay
Can anyone find me?
They get so close then move away.

I want to matter, to make a difference
But I am simply one among many.
I want to stand out and be heard

But I'm just a lonesome
Needle in the Hay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 3, 2012 at 7:36 PM
JACQUE, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Jacque congrats on your win..David
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June 1, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Jacque. Love, Carol
Bauer Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:33 PM
nice take on this topic. i enjoyed it! (p.s. i heard you!)
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 3:55 AM
Very nice.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
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