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Needle In the Hay

I am a needle in the hay Can anyone find me? They get so close then move away. I want to matter, to make a difference But I am simply one among many. I want to stand out and be heard But I'm just a lonesome Needle in the Hay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/3/2012 7:36:00 PM
JACQUE, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:47:00 PM
Jacque congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Jacque. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:33:00 PM
nice take on this topic. i enjoyed it! (p.s. i heard you!)
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:55:00 AM
Very nice.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
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