Mike Dailey Poet Limerick

Needle In the Hay

I get up at the break of day
Determined to have my way
But I’m just a man
Married men understand
That’s like finding a needle in hay

She starts out all happy and gay
But I know that soon something I say
Will make her turn moody
Do you think I’ll get booty
That’s like finding a needle in hay

If I treat her just right, I may
If not she will simply say nay
Finding words that are right
Before bedtime tonight
That’s like finding a needle in hay

Guys, you all know what they say
Where there’s a will there’s a way
Am I willing – you bet
But my chance I regret
That’s like finding a needle in hay

Mdailey	3/7/12

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Bas Holzhaus March 8, 2012 at 7:50 AM Nice limerick sequence. Thanks!

Marty Owens March 8, 2012 at 7:48 AM Oh and good luck in the contest...Marty

Marty Owens March 8, 2012 at 7:41 AM Well Mike I have to say to get a good lay those words you must find somewhere in your mind Or like you say...could just be a needle in hay.....very funny limerick...enjoyed...Marty