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Need You, Need You, Need You, Oh, How I Need You

3am at apart of a bridge of life can't take the changes can't make the ranges gotta be at work in an hour the water is your soft lips seducing me gotta get that guarantee gotta inspire my sanity away i go i am still free falling it is so petty, but you are the heartbreaker midnight next day i am found floating at the base with a smile the discoverers do not comprehend the sweet sunshine the detectives do not piece together the ultimate attraction had to taste the sweet juices of equality had to sample the other end of a forward motion had to re-experience the explosive net of wonder of my elusive butterfly away i went i am still going in circles the distinction felt so friendly, but cupid's angel arrow really cookes believe it or not, i am right where i wanna be, oh incandescent sweet freedom

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Date: 9/4/2024 12:01:00 AM
This poem delves into the tumultuous emotions of love and longing, capturing the push and pull between desire and despair. The repetition of "Need You" emphasizes the depth of the speaker's yearning, while the imagery of free falling and floating reflects the disorienting and consuming nature of their emotions. The poem paints a vivid picture of a heart caught in the throes of passion, where even pain becomes a paradoxical source of freedom. Well done Marty!...Frank
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