Need To Ride the Tide

I’ll give you a smile
to wipe away your tears
got to go, fly home
take your touch your memories,
need to breathe your Spanish air.

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 9:51 PM
nice one harry ;}
Omara Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 2:37 AM
A great tanka Harry. "...a smile to wipe away your tears". Beautiful.- Red
May Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 11:06 AM
amazing poetry....best wishes
A   Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 6:45 PM
wow, Harry this is lovely, mostly because i love the smile you give and the Spanish air around... excellent... LINDA
Jones Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 1:05 PM
An especially emotional write from you Harry...love it..
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May 12, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Sweet Spanish air means sweet memories. Lovely done my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
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May 9, 2013 at 2:30 PM
I like this Harry, so ride with the tide until you can smell that Spanish air. Take care and God bless you.... Lucy
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May 9, 2013 at 10:35 AM
- It's beautiful Harry ..... ..... Ride the tide .... enjoy yourself - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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