Need To Escape

How is my soul
Stuck in black hole?
Am in God's hands
Pass testing lands
No longer blind like mole!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 1:27 PM
a well written and wonderful write.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 6:21 AM
enjoyed reading....thanks for stopping by my poems. Are you having a great summer? Me and my son have been catching frogs and feeding the fish.
Ball Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Nicely done my friend. As long s we remain in The Shepherd's keep we will have nothing to fear. God Bless, JB
Foulk Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 2:51 PM
very creative piece, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Rain Finally Came.
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Joshua. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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