Need of Bleesing

O! Lord  of  lights( sun)
          Child predictable.
          Your pace and route
          Not so much adorable.

  So someday for change
   Rise against the trends.
  We are the poor southern
  Suffered  from  the  born.
          
         If change is the rule of nature
       Then why not changed your nature.
        Please, shower your blessings
       We are also your kind offsprings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Deo Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 7:55 PM
This is so powerful, wondering about why the poor are NOT empowered by Omnipotence (SATchidananda) shalom, shalom/shanthi/Salaam
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May 18, 2018 at 5:15 AM
Good Noon,Sir Thank u very much I have got a comment finally. I am writing only from few months perhaps nobody likes my views and poems. So I have decided to leave the poetry soup But you saved me . Thank you again.
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