Need Cheese for Whine

Haven’t been on soup much today
Been feeling ill some kind of way

Can’t put my finger on why I am sick
Did I catch a bug was it my last dish

I’m in no pain thank God for favor
So poetry soup I can now savor

Just feeling nauseous tired and lightheaded 
Writing poems is a jones done from pink bed
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Beaufort Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:11 AM
Karen, hope you feel better. At least you are well enough to share.
Jones Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 8:44 AM
All better now Duke! Was food poisoning and I recovered. Thanks
Williams Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Oh my gosh, are you really ill? Perhaps it's only an allergy or food intolerance - Now how did you write such a nice piece while you are feeling under the weather. Hugs Maria
Jones Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 1:17 AM
My doctor says come in to be seen! I don’t want to go lol. I don’t feel like driving but yes I’m ill and whining about it in a poem! Lol
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