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Necklace

If space had more than a billion stars I would still bring them down for you I will make you a necklace I would take the moon as a ring And distance as a thread And wrap it all up Circling it into a wristband So you have the world in your hand And I have you with me And we could face the remaining stars from Jupiter Counting the constellations and painting more And you'd have half the universe in your dress And half I would express And your laugh could make it more If I sat down with you all night If we gaze those dim lights in the sky Galaxies will be shyer,I'm sure I will find enough to access I will make a perfect necklace Stardust would confess So you'll wear it like a smile And you hold the world in your hand And I hold that remained So I that have you And you have me

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Date: 3/7/2017 1:29:00 PM
Over the moon romantic! Much enjoyed :)
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Prayoktr Niyuti
Date: 3/17/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/7/2017 8:57:00 AM
Such a delightful verse! Not sure about the last 4 lines. End stronger. After describing the necklace, the moon as a ring...i like that..so cool!
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Prayoktr Niyuti
Date: 3/17/2017 9:37:00 AM
I have yet so much to learn. Thanks for the feedback, I will keep it in mind. ^^

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