Prayoktr Niyuti Poet Verse

Necklace

If space had more than a billion stars 
I would still bring them down for you
I will make you a necklace
I would take the moon as a ring
And distance as a thread
And wrap it all up
Circling it into a wristband
So you have the world in your hand
And I have you with me
And we could face the remaining stars from Jupiter
Counting the constellations and painting more
And you'd have half the universe in your dress
And half I would express
And your laugh could make it more
If I sat down with you all night
If we gaze those dim lights in the sky
Galaxies will be shyer,I'm sure
I will find enough to access
I will make a perfect necklace
Stardust would confess
So you'll wear it like a smile
And you hold the world in your hand
And I hold that remained
So I that have you
And you have me

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 7, 2017 at 1:29 PM Over the moon romantic! Much enjoyed :) Prayoktr Niyuti March 17, 2017 at 9:36 AM Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:57 AM Such a delightful verse! Not sure about the last 4 lines. End stronger. After describing the necklace, the moon as a ring...i like that..so cool! Prayoktr Niyuti March 17, 2017 at 9:37 AM I have yet so much to learn. Thanks for the feedback, I will keep it in mind. ^^