Necklace

If space had more than a billion stars 
I would still bring them down for you
I will make you a necklace
I would take the moon as a ring
And distance as a thread
And wrap it all up
Circling it into a wristband
So you have the world in your hand
And I have you with me
And we could face the remaining stars from Jupiter
Counting the constellations and painting more
And you'd have half the universe in your dress
And half I would express
And your laugh could make it more
If I sat down with you all night
If we gaze those dim lights in the sky
Galaxies will be shyer,I'm sure
I will find enough to access
I will make a perfect necklace
Stardust would confess
So you'll wear it like a smile
And you hold the world in your hand
And I hold that remained
So I that have you
And you have me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/7/2017 1:29:00 PM
Over the moon romantic! Much enjoyed :)
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Prayoktr Niyuti
Date: 3/17/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/7/2017 8:57:00 AM
Such a delightful verse! Not sure about the last 4 lines. End stronger. After describing the necklace, the moon as a ring...i like that..so cool!
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Prayoktr Niyuti
Date: 3/17/2017 9:37:00 AM
I have yet so much to learn. Thanks for the feedback, I will keep it in mind. ^^
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