Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Nebulous Streams, Clouding My Brain

Nebulous Streams, Clouding My Brain

Sleeping death through timeless space
Nocturnal Nebulae that will displace
Misanthropic minds of clustered clouds
Bipolar builders of sacred shrouds

Elucidative echoes of enchanted eyes
Decussate delusions that shall arise
Carnal contortions camouflaging spheres
Deleterious dust expanding light years.



Dec.15.2016
What was I thinking - Contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

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Joseph May December 20, 2016 at 2:33 PM Congrats on a fine win WW

Stephen Pennell December 20, 2016 at 12:19 PM Congrats on your placement with this excellant poem deserved win stephen

Janice Canerdy December 20, 2016 at 10:27 AM WW, a 7 for your very imaginative, thought-provoking, WINNING poem! Janice

Sandra Haight December 20, 2016 at 9:49 AM WW, I love the deep message you bury in this wonderful poem, and also your use of alliteration. And...your eye image...a microcosm of the universe... It was interesting to read how you addressed the same line I used! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra

Robert Lindley December 20, 2016 at 9:01 AM I love both the poem and the photo. Both are wonderful presentations and a pleasure to read your fine poem. Congrats on your win..

Leileah Kasperyan December 20, 2016 at 4:18 AM Oh man :) I admire your skill with words. A brilliant job.

Meenakshi Raina December 19, 2016 at 8:40 PM Congratulations....very well written!

Eve Roper December 19, 2016 at 8:21 PM Very good, ^WW^, I love the poem and the photo is beautiful. Congratulations on your win... :) Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Hugs Eve

Doug Vinson December 19, 2016 at 7:08 PM : ) Winged Warrior. I think you really hit the bull's-eye with this poem. An excellent take on the line from Daniel's poem, and you ran with it for a long and pleasurable way.

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2016 at 6:17 PM So happy to see this brilliant poem on the winner's list WW. Congratulations! 7 ; )

Daniel Turner December 19, 2016 at 6:05 PM Congratulations Winged Man on your placement in my contest. Really top notch work. You had some really tough competition. I enjoyed your poem immensely. Thank you for your participation:)

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2016 at 1:19 PM This is genius! Mine is such a simple, child like entry....but then I read my poetry to my four year old granddaughter so there is my reasoning. Not that I could ever match your skill. This one blows me away! I am sure it will be given top honors. 7 ; )

Jan Allison December 17, 2016 at 7:10 PM My brain is too clouded to write for this contest - love the alliteration here ^WW^ good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta December 16, 2016 at 8:25 AM Very rich in words and figures ...

Joseph May December 16, 2016 at 8:23 AM I like the use of alliterations in this write ..Nicely done