Nebulous Horizon


Mist swallows the edge~
sky and sea blur into one,
no clear path in sight.
Yet I walk where light once fell,
trusting stars behind the haze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Your imagery in this poem is outstanding. I love the edge as a metaphor. Quite meaningful poem. Well done!
Asuncion Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. I appreciate your loving kindness. Love~BFA
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